his mistakes

seeing his movie,his mistakes are very clear,isnt it? he should have kept working hard,the same motivation as before. of course, its very difficult for everyone to keep doing ones best, but what is needed is to do so. the question,"what would be the thesis statement?" is hard to answer. i think that the thesis statement is "what is important over success" . we should work as hard as we can,even after success. i dont know whether i succeed or not in the future,however, i remember to do everything as hard as possible. it might mean that i can make it even though i face the difficulty, i think.

expriment

this expriment sounds so interestong. its very difficult for children to remain marshmallows alone. but whether they can do so or not shows their future:whether they will succeed or not. i think most children cant stand eating. in my childhood,if i had been in that situation,i would start to eat soon.so it means that i wont succeed in the future ;P haha if i have an opportunity to take the expriment, i will try not to eat. hmm,this topic is very difficult to write...